Elevator Pitch




 

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  1. Thank you, Philbert, for this informative and well produced vodcast.

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    1. Thank you, professor Blackstone! I am glad that my vodcast helps you get to know me more. Looking forward to know you more as well through our upcoming lessons!

      Regards,
      Philbert

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  2. Wonderful content. I love that you shared your leadership skills outside academic related activities and volunteered to so on your own accord. Its really nice to know that you contributed to your community in such a wonderful way. I hope you keep up this way. You also mentioned that you went Japan for your overseas internship, that must be pretty awesome as not many students get to do so during their poly internship. Language barrier and self studying overseas is pretty tough and yet you excel them. It really supported your strength of persistence well.

    I felt that your pacing is nice and with the help of subtitles, it helps viewers like to me keep up quickly. Unfortunately as its an video, maintaining eye contact with the viewer is very important as well. I hope you can improve on that in the future.

    Overall your content structure organization is good and the flow is smooth. Really enjoyed your pitch!👍

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    1. Hi You Cong,
      Appreciate your compliments and feedback. I would love to share more with you about myself if I get the chance to.
      I will try to work on my eye contact with the viewer with more practices and hope I will be able to do better on my future attempts.
      Thank you!

      Regards,
      Philbert

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  3. The pacing of your presentation was great and I love that you included hand gestures which makes it more pleasing to the eye. Personally I feel that the background could be abit distracting with so many things going on as the main focus should be on you. Maybe you could zoom in a little and adjust the camera angle so that everything sits nicely in the frame. Good job!

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    1. Hi Royson!

      First of all, thank you for your compliments! I do totally agree with you regarding my background with that plushy face pillow😅, good pointer that I should be wary of in the future. Thank you!

      Regards,
      Philbert

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  4. Hello Philbert! I have enjoyed listening to your insighful and confident pitch. I believe you have broken down parts of your speech and link them appropriately. I believe you have many qualities that employers will be looking out for, such as taking initiative and leadership.

    I believe your background relates to your hobby in collecting limited-edition sneakers, but i do agree with Royson that it can get really distracting.

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    1. Hi Bryan!
      Thank you for your compliments. Appreciate that you see my character skillset as a qualities employers be looking out for. I will continue to improve myself and be the better version of me.
      Of course I will also take note of my background in the future!😂

      Regards,
      Philbert

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